First Draft of the King James Bible, Hacker News

Who is Samuel Ward and what were you looking for in his papers in the summer of (***************************?

Samuel Ward 1572 – 1643) was a moderate Puritan theologian who spent much of his career as the master of Sidney Sussex College at the University of Cambridge. Sometime in or around 1604, when Ward was still just a young man, he was tapped to be one of the translators of the King James Bible, published in 1611.

In 2011, as part of the four-hundredth anniversary of the King James Bible , I was asked to write an essay on Ward for a collection of essays (ed. Mordechai Feingold, Laborsers in the Vineyard of the Lord: Scholarship and the Making of the King James Version of the Bible). I made multiple research trips to Sidney Sussex, where a number of Ward’s manuscripts and papers still survive. Late in the course of one trip I discovered in one of Ward’s former notebooks an early, seemingly first draft of a portion of his work on the King James translation of the Bible, making it the earliest draft of any part of the King James translation now known to survive.

How did you figure out that this notebook contained a draft of part of the King James Bible?

The eminent historian Margo Todd had prepared a catalog of all of Ward’s extant papers now at Sidney Sussex. She described the notebook as containing a “verse-by-verse biblical commentary” of an unspecified biblical book, also featuring “Greek word studies, and some Hebrew notes.” On closer inspection, it didn’t seem that Ward was “commenting” on the unknown biblical book, so the first task was to figure out which book of the Bible the notes concerned.

Once I realized they pertained to the book known as 1 Esdras and that another set of notes in the notebook pertained to a book known as Wisdom, both included in the King James Bible as part of the Old Testament Apocrypha, which I knew Ward had been involved in translating, the penny started to drop. The notes, however, didn’t resemble what one might expect a draft of the King James Bible to look like. It was only when I realized that, rather than preparing an entirely fresh translation, the notes showed Ward, verse by verse, often phrase by phrase, proposing revisions to a prior English translation of the Bible known as the Bishops’ Bible — which is how the King James translators were, in fact, ordered to approach their new translation — that I finally realized what I had before me. At that moment, I sat back in my chair in a stunned silence. It’s the kind of thing one never expects to have the chance to lay eyes on.

What does this discovery mean for how the six committees convened in 1604 by James I created
a new English-language Bible?

Ward’s draft provides the first hard evidence that at least one of the six teams or “companies” of translators went about their work, initially, by delegating the translation of individual biblical books or parts of books to individual translators. The traditional assumption had long been that the companies of translators worked on the translation together as a group or committee through the entire process. This doesn’t mean that Ward’s draft shows the King James Bible to be any less a marvel of collaboration than it has always been regarded as being. It does, though, indicate that the King James translation may be far more a patchwork of “individual” translations — the product of individual translators and individual companies working in individual ways — than has ever before been fully considered.

Have you gleaned any new insights into the beauty of the King James Version?

That’s one of the key things I’m hoping to explore with the help of the NEH fellowship. It was once common to suggest that crafting a “beautiful” or “literary” translation of the Bible had been one of the principal goals of the King James translators. More recently, scholars have pushed back against that idea, revealing the translators to have been animated far more by scholarly and theological considerations. Ward’s draft, however, helps illustrate that it may be possible to correct too far in that direction. Various decisions Ward made as a translator seem to have been arrived at for what appear to be stylistic reasons, at least in part and in certain moments above all. Ward’s draft also indicates that stylistic and scholarly considerations should not be seen as mutually exclusive. One could even argue that the King James translation’s enduring power lies precisely in its unique union of those two vital aspects — scholarship and style — at the heart of any translation, biblical or otherwise.